Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Aumtumn poem

The trees leaves fall on the sun parched hill. one minute later the leaves got sun extinguish. The leaves were not grand and green any more. But they were crisp and crunchy. The autumn  set in. crunch crack the leaves

Well done, Mark. You have chosen some descriptive words. When we write poems, we begin each idea on a new line, like this:

The tree's leaves fall on the sun-parched hill.
One minute later, the leaves got sun extinguish (Think about those words - what do they mean?)
The leaves were not grand and green anymore.
They were crisp and crunchy. 
The autumn set in.
Crunch! Crack! The leaves ............

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