Winter Morning

We have been learning to use personification in our writing.
It was a wintry morning. I woke up about 3 o’clock  in the morning and boy! It was cold! Brrrr! My fingers were frost bitten. My gloves warmed my frost bitten hands. I heard a tree whisper. I heard the  wind whistling.

The peaceful flowing river had  a crocodile in it. It was lurking by the river bank and I went to the bank to get the a blue tongue lizard. The crocodile leaped on the blue tongue lizard  but the crocodile was coated in solid ice . I built a tank for the blue tongue lizard. I called him Freddy.
I went home and put Freddy in his tank and rolled it down the ice coated road. I pushed and pushed the tank until my body was frost bitten. I finally made to my house. I put the heat pump on and the fire I was nice and warm now.

Winter Morning

It was a wintry morning. I saw icicles invading the tree. I saw Jack Frost mowing the warm lawn into an icy lawn. I was lying on the warm grass. Suddenly, a big ball of snow landed on top of me.